<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:georss='http://www.georss.org/georss' xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113547088478482843</id><updated>2012-02-16T09:54:43.622-08:00</updated><category term='Story'/><category term='Aeon Flux'/><category term='Robert McKee'/><category term='Weekly Sketch'/><category term='moleskine'/><category term='Jack Hamm'/><category term='Rasta'/><category term='Dave Kellett'/><category term='Facebook Muse'/><category term='Joe Quesada'/><title type='text'>Ungoodwise</title><subtitle type='html'></subtitle><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/feeds/posts/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default?max-results=100'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/'/><link rel='hub' href='http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/'/><author><name>ljamal</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TSPVcaRA7rI/AAAAAAAAAG4/krtQ89gkCws/S220/148660_470104177837_531147837_5602396_3747571_n.jpg'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>7</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>100</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113547088478482843.post-437237046625542278</id><published>2011-12-21T07:14:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2011-12-21T07:14:44.677-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Time flies.... The Countdown Begins...</title><summary type='text'>Man!! Where has the time gone?
It's 10 months since my last post. Little has happened during that time, but Ungoodwise is still in progress. A year from today, I will launch the first Ungoodwise story to be completed in over 12 years. The importance of that date in Ungoodwise will become apparent from with the very first page.

Until then... expect more updates.
I'm currently working on software </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/feeds/437237046625542278/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/12/time-flies-countdown-begins.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/437237046625542278'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/437237046625542278'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/12/time-flies-countdown-begins.html' title='Time flies.... The Countdown Begins...'/><author><name>ljamal</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TSPVcaRA7rI/AAAAAAAAAG4/krtQ89gkCws/S220/148660_470104177837_531147837_5602396_3747571_n.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113547088478482843.post-4483933458899599686</id><published>2011-02-06T10:39:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2011-12-21T07:08:24.675-08:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Robert McKee'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Jack Hamm'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Facebook Muse'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Weekly Sketch'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='moleskine'/><title type='text'>Story, Life, Eyes and Facebook</title><summary type='text'>The day after I posted last week, I received Aeon Flux the movie AND the Jack Hamm books. Despite the reviews, I think Aeon Flux is an underrated movie. There were some great concepts explored and lots of great ideas waiting to be be stolen. I plan to watch it again after I finish with Story and incorporate some ideas.

I didn't have much time to read this week, so I read about 7 pages of Story. </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/feeds/4483933458899599686/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/02/story-life-and-eyes.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/4483933458899599686'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/4483933458899599686'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/02/story-life-and-eyes.html' title='Story, Life, Eyes and Facebook'/><author><name>ljamal</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TSPVcaRA7rI/AAAAAAAAAG4/krtQ89gkCws/S220/148660_470104177837_531147837_5602396_3747571_n.jpg'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TU7ostKBRhI/AAAAAAAAAHw/tV8v3diWQSs/s72-c/2011013020110205-01.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113547088478482843.post-6689100210115682060</id><published>2011-01-30T16:44:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2011-01-30T16:44:29.149-08:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Aeon Flux'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Robert McKee'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Dave Kellett'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Jack Hamm'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Rasta'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Weekly Sketch'/><title type='text'>The Elements of Story</title><summary type='text'>I just finished the last chapter of Story Part 2 today, so I'm moving from the Elements of Story to the Principles of Story Design. This chapter is entitled Structure and Meaning. I haven't given much thought to the meaning of the story that I'm telling. I know that's a story about revolution. It's action/adventure. It's a love story. Those are the genres, but what is the meaning of Abiogenesis </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/feeds/6689100210115682060/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/01/elements-of-story.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/6689100210115682060'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/6689100210115682060'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/01/elements-of-story.html' title='The Elements of Story'/><author><name>ljamal</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TSPVcaRA7rI/AAAAAAAAAG4/krtQ89gkCws/S220/148660_470104177837_531147837_5602396_3747571_n.jpg'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TUYDA1vR93I/AAAAAAAAAHo/Mwm-Kj7okjE/s72-c/20110123-20110129-border.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113547088478482843.post-4120053234629318596</id><published>2011-01-23T09:48:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2011-01-23T09:48:53.349-08:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Robert McKee'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='moleskine'/><title type='text'>Abiogenesis: Dystopian, Action/Adventure, Love Story</title><summary type='text'>Went out to the book store early this and ran into some full-sized blank moleskines that I just HAD to buy. It was a 3-pack, so they have become my new Ungoodwise work journal. Of course, right now that means it's completely and absolutely blank as I'm still working through McKee's Story. I've reached the 5th chapter of Story, so I've passed the chapter on genre. I knew from the onset that this </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/feeds/4120053234629318596/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/01/abiogenesis-dystopian-actionadventure.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/4120053234629318596'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/4120053234629318596'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/01/abiogenesis-dystopian-actionadventure.html' title='Abiogenesis: Dystopian, Action/Adventure, Love Story'/><author><name>ljamal</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TSPVcaRA7rI/AAAAAAAAAG4/krtQ89gkCws/S220/148660_470104177837_531147837_5602396_3747571_n.jpg'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TTxpnqxmWAI/AAAAAAAAAHk/kntqzC6LrXQ/s72-c/IMG00643-20110123-1157-border.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113547088478482843.post-1968686035305962910</id><published>2011-01-16T13:02:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2011-01-16T14:24:35.802-08:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Robert McKee'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Weekly Sketch'/><title type='text'>More Story and Art</title><summary type='text'>I'm slowly moving through McKee's Story. I'm currently just a couple pages into Chapter 3 (page 68). I have just over 360 pages left. After finishing Story, I will jump back into reading Campbell's The Hero with a Thousand Faces and then read Story once again. I plan to use both this books extensively as I work through writing this version of Ungoodwise. 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I haven't have a chance to read beyond the introduction. I first remember reading about Story from a Wizard article about Joe Quesada and Jimmy Palmiotti working on Ash at Event Comics. I've heard it recommended by others over the years, so I finally decided to give it a read. I'll let you know how that goes, once I get further along.

</summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/feeds/4654199389443017446/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/01/we-are-telling-story-about-clockwork.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/4654199389443017446'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/4654199389443017446'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/01/we-are-telling-story-about-clockwork.html' title='We are telling a Story about a Clockwork Orange living amonst the Lord of the Flies'/><author><name>ljamal</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TSPVcaRA7rI/AAAAAAAAAG4/krtQ89gkCws/S220/148660_470104177837_531147837_5602396_3747571_n.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113547088478482843.post-18814724022459819</id><published>2011-01-04T19:29:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2011-01-04T19:42:53.451-08:00</updated><title type='text'>A New Year... A New Beginning</title><summary type='text'>Welcome to a new beginning for Ungoodwise. Ungoodwise is a cyberpunk, dystopian concept that has been stuck in my brain for over a decade. It has had many fits and starts and stops and retools but now I'm ready to begin and finally get her out of my head and unto screen and paper.

This blog will chronicle the journey from this beginning to the end. Hopefully, that end is a completed graphic </summary><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/feeds/18814724022459819/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/01/new-year-new-beginning.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/18814724022459819'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/6113547088478482843/posts/default/18814724022459819'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://ungoodwise.blogspot.com/2011/01/new-year-new-beginning.html' title='A New Year... A New Beginning'/><author><name>ljamal</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_cGCUmf9GIuU/TSPVcaRA7rI/AAAAAAAAAG4/krtQ89gkCws/S220/148660_470104177837_531147837_5602396_3747571_n.jpg'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry></feed>
